DTNLive's OTA Application

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DTNLive's OTA Application

Post by DTNLive on Mon May 29, 2017 8:36 pm

OOC Section:

SteamID: STEAM_0:1:60664015

Steam Name: DTNLive

Why do you wish to become an Overwatch Transhuman Arm Unit?:
I wish to become an OTA unit so I can have the full experience of roleplaying as a combine soldier, and so I can help further the cause of the union.

Give a detailed role-playing example with how you would type it out in the chat with /mes etc as an OTA unit:

** OTA-OWS.77723 would walk to the Administrator saying "Ready for escort."
** OTA-OWS.77723 walking behind the administrator (for lack of knowing the admin I will use Breen) seeing a citizen staring as they walked past it would say "Move along."
** OTA-OWS.77723 would then stop as the reached the nexus opening the energy gate for Breen as he walked through there would be an explosion behind them, the unit would say "Get down!" and would duck behind the desk at the front of the nexus.
** OTA-OWS.77723 radios in "OTA-OWS.77723 to SeC, Code Red, Breen 10-99."
** OTA-OWS.77723 would proceed to open fire on the individuals as the exited from the train station hitting one in the arm causing them to drop their weapon, would then radio in "647a times three, requesting additional OTA units."
** OTA-OWS.77723 would be grazed by a bullet as the anti-civilians shot she would duck down behind the cover reloading her gun.
** OTA-OWS.77723 peaking back over the top she would unload a full clip into one anti-civ now there would be only one left that could cause harm.
** the last anti-civ would be fleeing
** OTA-OWS.77723 would then chase the fleeing anti-civ since she had augmentations she would catch the Anti-civ quickly tackling him to the ground saying "Prepare for augmentation." she would take out her sidearm placing it against the 647a's head she would fire a shot into it.
** OTA-OWS.77723 would proceed to walk up to the downed Anti-Civ with the wounded arm flipping her over and zip tieing her placing a bag on her head. carrying her to the Nexus gate pushing her through, She would signal to an i5 unit telling him to take the anti-civ into a holding cell.
** OTA-OWS.77723 would look towards the administrator and say "Clear."
** OTA-OWS.77723 radios in "Threat neutralized, Code Green."

Explain why it is important that you behave correctly as an Overwatch Transhuman Arm unit:

So that the RP isn't ruined by an OP character going rogue and becoming a rebel it would just ruin the rp for everyone else.

What are your past experiences with Overwatch Transhuman Arm characters if any, give a detailed summary:

I have no past experience with being an OTA Unit but I have been MPF on a couple servers one being Generation Roleplay.
IC Section:

Do you have any amputations or limbs/organs missing?: Negative.

Do you require medication?: No sirs.

Are you subjugated in rebellious activities?: None.

Give yourself up to the Union for the greater good?: Affirmative

Sacrifice your body for the sacred Union?: 10-4

Do and perform as asked and always?: Aye.

By signing this form, you give your body up for the Union to protect the Overwatch Transhuman Arm on the planet you currently reside on:

Christi Schmidt

DTNLive

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Join date : 2017-05-19

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Re: DTNLive's OTA Application

Post by NoahtheBoah36 on Tue May 30, 2017 8:45 am

Right. To put it bluntly, your application is, well, bad. First off, please familiarize yourself with the MPF guide, as much of it would definitely apply to the OTA. Your terminologies are rather bad, and your IC section answers are, well, cringey. Would you write 10-4 on a form at the DMV or a Doctor's Office? Imagine that's what you're filling out here.

Also, the signature you used is a character you have already created. If you want, this character can be PK'd and turned into an OTA, but you aren't required to actually use a real character's name for this application. Just some food for thought.

I'll give you 24 hours to update your application before I do my final review.
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Re: DTNLive's OTA Application

Post by NoahtheBoah36 on Wed May 31, 2017 12:57 pm

Given a two-day extension. I talked to him on steam.

The app will be reviewed on June 2.
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